Status Updates From A Broken Kind of Life

"she tried not to mourn the loss of her son but to embrace the broken, disfigured boy left in his place."

Dying is the toned down YA memory versus being burned with cigarettes?

awkward time jumps / foremost expert in the country is an unnecessary and credibility jarring word choice

It's a bit distracting to hear Aaron lament things that have been going on "for Years" when his attack occurred only two years ago. A different wording would have been more keeping in the flow.

Not sure WHY the code examples are more elaborate in the YA version than in the Adult version

both versions have some rough jump cuts in the timeline that could have been transitioned much easier with just a few word changes.

Expletives eliminated and/or softened in this version. For me this works much better from Aaron's wounded childlike persona

Narrator's inconsistent use of "deaf voice"

Why the change? wondering how to make his parents love him again became wondering if they'd ever love him again

Omitted sex scene in Spencer's first scene

Just...wow...