Status Updates From Touch Me Not

I'd say about 3.75 stars.

The final "claiming" scene is definitely off: mostly, it's just in the wrong place (the story was over, I didn't want to read any more). This caused a lot of the tension or arousal to have no chemistry (ho-hum). I sort of wish the hospital intimacy scene was the end, sorta wished the theme of "mated fully with OTHER acts" was incorporated. Which is odd for me. But the rest! Love. Sequel I will read!

Hmm. Clever writing to ease into a sequel. No horrible cliff hanger, but I desperately want to know more about the world, about Grant, about Ezra, and maybe a little about Julia. Definitely about twins. Would twins be mated to the same person?

WHAT a climax! Whew! Fantastic. Still, a very straightforward story, nothing terribly surprising or deeply stilling (other than its unique human bio-psychology). This one is like a car chase you can't not watch.

But without the "rape, pain, and complicated plot" thing. (Pathfinder is a-fucking-mazing. Have my babies, Jaken.)

I just realized what book this reminds me of: Pathfinder! By J. A. Jaken. It's the "hurry up and claim the sub before another Dom does and you lose your chance at using his power" thing.

Wh--?! Fuck! Nooooooooo! Grant! Noooooooo! *heart pounding*

And please tell me there will be fireworks between Grant and Ezra in a sequel. Oh god! But they are both Doms... or are they...?

Why is this so freaking addictive! MC is in such a torn space--I want you but I don't! But wait! I have to deal with this life or death situation first! There isn't much to the story (but the world sure has heaps-o-potential) and the psychology is running too quickly (insta-mate 'n' all), but I can't stop reading! It's a race!

This is surprisingly addictive....

Dang, it's good!

It makes no sense. Jake will not sell to the corporation even though he's a sub with limited or no rights -so if Skinner and his sub are so powerful that they can even make doms submit, why instead of sending Julia and possible mate/doms -why didn't they go themselves????

It makes no sense. Jake will not sell to the corporation even though he's a sub with limited or no rights -so if Skinner and his sub are so powerful that they can even make doms submit, why instead of sending Julia and possible mate/doms -why didn't they go themselves????

ugh, the unimaginative, overused bathroom masturbation scene...

I'm not jumping-up-and-down about this one, but I'm not disliking it. We'll see how the end turns out, but as it stands, I'd say 3 stars for now.

This one has big shoes to fill after Unbreak My Heart! But it looks really good!!!

This looks so good... I'm excited!!!