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kimberly_rose
is finished
The final "claiming" scene is definitely off: mostly, it's just in the wrong place (the story was over, I didn't want to read any more). This caused a lot of the tension or arousal to have no chemistry (ho-hum). I sort of wish the hospital intimacy scene was the end, sorta wished the theme of "mated fully with OTHER acts" was incorporated. Which is odd for me. But the rest! Love. Sequel I will read!
— Nov 27, 2013 07:28AM
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kimberly_rose
is 93% done
Hmm. Clever writing to ease into a sequel. No horrible cliff hanger, but I desperately want to know more about the world, about Grant, about Ezra, and maybe a little about Julia. Definitely about twins. Would twins be mated to the same person?
— Nov 27, 2013 07:10AM
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kimberly_rose
is 92% done
WHAT a climax! Whew! Fantastic. Still, a very straightforward story, nothing terribly surprising or deeply stilling (other than its unique human bio-psychology). This one is like a car chase you can't not watch.
— Nov 27, 2013 07:05AM
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kimberly_rose
is 89% done
But without the "rape, pain, and complicated plot" thing. (Pathfinder is a-fucking-mazing. Have my babies, Jaken.)
— Nov 27, 2013 06:54AM
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kimberly_rose
is 89% done
I just realized what book this reminds me of: Pathfinder! By J. A. Jaken. It's the "hurry up and claim the sub before another Dom does and you lose your chance at using his power" thing.
— Nov 27, 2013 06:53AM
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kimberly_rose
is 86% done
Wh--?! Fuck! Nooooooooo! Grant! Noooooooo! *heart pounding*
— Nov 27, 2013 06:50AM
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kimberly_rose
is 85% done
And please tell me there will be fireworks between Grant and Ezra in a sequel. Oh god! But they are both Doms... or are they...?
— Nov 27, 2013 06:40AM
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kimberly_rose
is 80% done
Why is this so freaking addictive! MC is in such a torn space--I want you but I don't! But wait! I have to deal with this life or death situation first! There isn't much to the story (but the world sure has heaps-o-potential) and the psychology is running too quickly (insta-mate 'n' all), but I can't stop reading! It's a race!
— Nov 27, 2013 06:40AM
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Adrianamae
is 50% done
It makes no sense. Jake will not sell to the corporation even though he's a sub with limited or no rights -so if Skinner and his sub are so powerful that they can even make doms submit, why instead of sending Julia and possible mate/doms -why didn't they go themselves????
— Sep 25, 2013 09:20AM
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Adrianamae
is 50% done
It makes no sense. Jake will not sell to the corporation even though he's a sub with limited or no rights -so if Skinner and his sub are so powerful that they can even make doms submit, why instead of sending Julia and possible mate/doms -why didn't they go themselves????
— Sep 25, 2013 09:20AM
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Adrianamae
is 10% done
ugh, the unimaginative, overused bathroom masturbation scene...
— Sep 25, 2013 08:46AM
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Gigi
is 80% done
I'm not jumping-up-and-down about this one, but I'm not disliking it. We'll see how the end turns out, but as it stands, I'd say 3 stars for now.
— Sep 18, 2013 01:34PM
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Gigi
is starting
This one has big shoes to fill after Unbreak My Heart! But it looks really good!!!
— Sep 17, 2013 06:27PM
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