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The platonic sex scene with him and his friend was great and well done. :D Ahh! Although tbh like. That scene makes the entire first 30% null and void and a waste of time. -_-;

*crinkles nose* authors who do the "GIANT PARAGRAPH TO DESCRIBE EVERY INCH OF MY CHAR IN ONE BIG DUMP IN THE FIRST CHAPTER" like. at this point like. it's just so tacky. it's not so much a bad writing thing to me anymore as a "did you not have an editor!? omg" thing

Loving this story!

attaboy Jerath....

aww man, aww man, HOLD ON!!!

ohmygoodness.....he's going to have sex with his best friend, a chick?

yikes!

hmmmm, that was a touch predictable.....*fingers crossed*....hope this picks up, I'm ready for a fabulous read

After reading this story, it makes me wonder why there's a black panther on the cover... and not a jaguar...