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Jaylee
is 39% done
The platonic sex scene with him and his friend was great and well done. :D Ahh! Although tbh like. That scene makes the entire first 30% null and void and a waste of time. -_-;
— Jul 18, 2015 12:46PM
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Jaylee
is 6% done
*crinkles nose* authors who do the "GIANT PARAGRAPH TO DESCRIBE EVERY INCH OF MY CHAR IN ONE BIG DUMP IN THE FIRST CHAPTER" like. at this point like. it's just so tacky. it's not so much a bad writing thing to me anymore as a "did you not have an editor!? omg" thing
— Jul 12, 2015 10:21AM
