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Gretchen
is 71% done
This short story is taking me over a week to read. Yikes!
— Jul 11, 2018 11:54AM
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Silver
is on page 5 of 79
Prose is obvious, clunky and desperately needs editing: "The mobile phone attached to his arm vibrated. Every time he went out running he tried not to take his mobile with him, but always did. And it often rang." London weather is described as, "cold, windy, cloudy and rainy."
Why is the font miniscule?! The pages are large enough - did the ink cost too much? I'll probably donate it to the library sale.
— Apr 19, 2017 06:31AM
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Why is the font miniscule?! The pages are large enough - did the ink cost too much? I'll probably donate it to the library sale.
Nadia
is 15% done
sorry this was not for me I tried several times but struggle so sorry I gave up
— Jan 29, 2014 02:24PM
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