Status Updates From The Missing Link (Marked, #1)

Some redeeming moments, but it’s a hunt to find them.

This book has some sloppy copy editing, and the story screamed Sons of Anarchy fanfic.

Atrocious writing— truly childish. Definitely a little toxic. Sounds like it was written by an 18 year old’s idea of what a bad boy might be like. I’m going to power through until minimum 25% before I DNF — let’s give this ol’ girl a fighting chance.

Like five pages in and already there Are more (parenthesis) than should be legally allowed in published work. Eyebrows are raised as the to quality to come if the writer can’t organize her thoughts enough to stop interrupting herself.

wow..

Starting to slow down for me so not enjoying it as much.

This heroine is dumb as fuck 😒

If you love someone you look past their faults and flaws, where most people dwell on them and use it against them. It isn't always in your favor. You can't reign in your emotions; when you feel something, you feel it, in every fucking part of you. I love that about you. I'm jealous you feel so freely and powerfully. You're not afraid of your emotions, you own them, and I have mad fucking respect for that.”

page count in Calibre is 348

my page count indicates 589 pages to The Missing Link on Calibre???????????????

Jay and Lily leaving for San Francisco...

Better than expected.