J.L.’s Reviews > The Missing Link > Status Update

This book has some sloppy copy editing, and the story screamed Sons of Anarchy fanfic.

Atrocious writing— truly childish. Definitely a little toxic. Sounds like it was written by an 18 year old’s idea of what a bad boy might be like. I’m going to power through until minimum 25% before I DNF — let’s give this ol’ girl a fighting chance.

Like five pages in and already there Are more (parenthesis) than should be legally allowed in published work. Eyebrows are raised as the to quality to come if the writer can’t organize her thoughts enough to stop interrupting herself.