Status Updates From My Book Boyfriend (New York...

Reading on Libby from library

"Should I take up crochet? Would Lily wear something I made?" LOVE A MAN WHO IMMEDIATELY YEARNS 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️ like,, sir, you've known her for total of 5 minutes, had barely two conversations with her, basically suing her ass because of that garden, and yet all you can think of is how to make her like you back??? I LOVE IT HERE

This is cute asf

Already off the bat - it’s moving fast. You’re supposed to build up and set the scene. Also why should I, as the reader, care for this garden that you want to save? You need to make me care, and set the scene - the vibe. Feel like this is moving quickly. Even the interactions between Lily and her friend, Bella weren’t natural (?)