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She still hasn't told Jude about the calls from her ex. Do these women not think about how they'd feel in the same situation? So frustrating!

62% and we're still circling the same topics and repeating conversations. And please, God, take domestic violence seriously. Being harassed by an ex and saying "what do i do?" for weeks is bad representation of actual life actions.

Because I'm in that kind of mood, i'm going to point out that chapter 11 is pretty much pointless and could have been edited out entirely. If it doesn't advance the plot or show character development, let it go. Adding it because it talks about attraction only - we've seen a million times in this book already.

I just realized this book has 50 chapters. Romance writers, please, get a better editor. If you need 50 chapters to tell your story, there's way too much internal dialogue. We don't need the same paragraph repeated every few pages.

I'm hoping this book gets better. I'm not a fan of the FMC is a hot mess trope. I just don't understand why an author would write a book about a personality they don't seem to like. We'll see how it goes.