Status Updates From Hometown Hero

Alright, I'm dropping this. I had decided to give it to the first sex scene - I actually went past it. The writing somewhat improved during the sex scenes, which I find funny. But it's uninteresting. There's no connection to these characters. He's literally breeding women as a service, moving onto the next after one is done. Barely any background about them. There's no excitement. And the writing sucks otherwise.

I take back the slight leniency I gave the writing last update. This is terribly written. I've seen fanfics with worse writing, sure, but those are just fanfics. This is a published novel. It's bad. It has that super stilted and far too casual almost conversational style that reeks of amateur-ness. I'm thinking I might drop this, that's how bad it is. I'm not loving the story yet, which is making it worse.

I've seen worse writing, but this isn't great. The foreword (spelled that wrong last time lol) said he wrote it in 8 days, and it shows. Just right now it said amt. instead of amount. In dialogue. Like come on.
So the mc got a new penis (because of course) and the description of it was almost disconcertingly fetishistic. Twice in 2 pages he compared it to something on a boy and no stop that's creepy as fuck.

Trash time! Been awhile since I read some trash. I picked this somewhat randomly off of my list. Reading the forward the author wrote... I don't know. This seems like it might be a bit too much, even for me. But let's see.