Status Updates From The Boy Who Lurks in Shadow...

It’s a good story, but it is fairly predictable.

I am enjoying the story and I suspect I know who Elliot might be. Guess I’ll soon see if I’m right.

The one thing that bothers me is the constant head-hopping. Otherwise it’s a pretty good read.

Ok as much as I liked Lila in the first book, I’m starting to believe she is a complete idiot in this one. She keeps making some really, really stupid decisions. 😝

It’s a good story, but the author has a bad habit of head-hopping, which is a little jarring at times. Multiple viewpoints can be useful, but within the same paragraph it doesn’t work so well.
Also, there’s an entire section where the prose switches from past-tense to present. Dunno what’s going on there.