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Shauna
is 47% done
I am enjoying the story and I suspect I know who Elliot might be. Guess I’ll soon see if I’m right.
The one thing that bothers me is the constant head-hopping. Otherwise it’s a pretty good read.
— Apr 27, 2025 05:42PM
The one thing that bothers me is the constant head-hopping. Otherwise it’s a pretty good read.
Shauna
is 12% done
Ok as much as I liked Lila in the first book, I’m starting to believe she is a complete idiot in this one. She keeps making some really, really stupid decisions. 😝
— Apr 14, 2025 03:11AM
Shauna
is 10% done
It’s a good story, but the author has a bad habit of head-hopping, which is a little jarring at times. Multiple viewpoints can be useful, but within the same paragraph it doesn’t work so well.
Also, there’s an entire section where the prose switches from past-tense to present. Dunno what’s going on there.
— Apr 13, 2025 03:44AM
Also, there’s an entire section where the prose switches from past-tense to present. Dunno what’s going on there.

