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I quit....

Is it just me or is this book all over the place, I'm finding it hard to keep up.
I don't know when a scene or day has ended and moved to the next one.
Things are said in the past tense that are happening in the present.

i loved riot and london soooo much, i'm such a sucker for this trope and it was written wonderfully, but i gotta say i'm also vvv excited for deck and knight's book!! their chemistry in this one chapter alone is fire! the /tension/!!! can't wait for their story <3