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I don’t understand the attraction between the two.
The author never really explains it beside it being love at first sight, which is boring.

Also now the MMC is having a whole side plot about how he’s finally being treated as a labourer and seeing what it’s like for the poors™, and it seems so odd and out of place. At no point before this was his ignorance of common folk a point of conflict in the story.

Right off the bat, the writing seemed amateur and I began suspecting this was self-published. The author seems to be ignorant of some basic principles of effective writing.

I looked it up and my suspicions were confirmed.

I’ll continue to read and hope I can turn off the writer part of my brain and enjoy the book, instead of mentally correcting the flaws the whole way through.

Okay im sat

A moment later, Marcus appeared at the door, ready to climb into the carriage. Giles stayed him with a gesture of his hand and a pleasant, if mildly caustic, smile. “Oh, no,” he said. “I’m afraid you’ll be riding topside.”

And he snapped the door shut straight in Marcus’ face.

LOL
Omg the grovel is beginning so early in the book, will it be 100 pages of grovel? I love this book

“I quite like having pretty things, and to not worry about pinching pence to make rent,” she said. “So I will stay. For the time being.” Amen! I love Lydia

This man is crazy for real LOL
Screams that he is not obsessed but spends his entire time stalking her
Is upset she lives in a shitty place in a shitty area so he moves her to a better one
This book is actually hilarious, I can't wait for him to realize she never even cheated on him, the grovel better be good smh

I wasn't sure about this book cuz the mmc is a little deranged but lovers to enemies to lovers is a trope I have secretly been craving I guess because the book is hitting now

There's still 45% of the book left, the MMC is in utter despair of how wrong he treated the FMC, and he's going to spend the rest of the book trying to win her back? Thank you for the food Aydra Richards

Hopefully this makes up for the last book that had 0 grovel?? Fingers crossed!