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I don’t understand the attraction between the two.
The author never really explains it beside it being love at first sight, which is boring.
Also now the MMC is having a whole side plot about how he’s finally being treated as a labourer and seeing what it’s like for the poors™, and it seems so odd and out of place. At no point before this was his ignorance of common folk a point of conflict in the story.
— Mar 30, 2026 04:42PM
The author never really explains it beside it being love at first sight, which is boring.
Also now the MMC is having a whole side plot about how he’s finally being treated as a labourer and seeing what it’s like for the poors™, and it seems so odd and out of place. At no point before this was his ignorance of common folk a point of conflict in the story.
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Right off the bat, the writing seemed amateur and I began suspecting this was self-published. The author seems to be ignorant of some basic principles of effective writing.
I looked it up and my suspicions were confirmed.
I’ll continue to read and hope I can turn off the writer part of my brain and enjoy the book, instead of mentally correcting the flaws the whole way through.
— Mar 29, 2026 12:22AM
I looked it up and my suspicions were confirmed.
I’ll continue to read and hope I can turn off the writer part of my brain and enjoy the book, instead of mentally correcting the flaws the whole way through.
