Status Updates From Daisy, Yellow (Paw Prints #1)
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Pati
is 97% done
Wow! At the end she thanks her " proofing team".... 4 people supposedly proofread this. I hate to tell her but she needs a new team, people who will be honest not only about all the un-American things but also about all of the errors that are still in the book! SMH... I won't read this author again.
— Aug 13, 2018 05:44PM
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Pati
is 38% done
Wow! Dialogue just got weirder. One guy speaking and the other thinking... yet the talking guy responds to the thoughts. SMH.... absolutely ridiculous
— Aug 13, 2018 01:05PM
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Pati
is 23% done
No freaking American would say, "we'd better get mobile"!!!! We'd say that we'd better get going or we better get a move on. SMH.... Damn! If you don't know how to make American characters sound American then don't write stories based in America!! Or hire a freaking editor or proofreader that is American and can correct all your mistakes!
— Aug 13, 2018 12:10PM
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Pati
is 22% done
Stopping by is how an American would say it. Not "calling in"...
— Aug 13, 2018 12:04PM
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Pati
is 15% done
and now we're back to being told what they've talked about.... *sigh* I really need to remember not to buy this authors books anymore.
— Aug 13, 2018 11:31AM
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Pati
is 14% done
Why tell us that Hunter "tells him"??? This makes no sense considering that they're in the middle of dialogue. SMH...
— Aug 13, 2018 11:25AM
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Pati
is 9% done
*sigh* I can't believe this is supposed to be set in the US. This definitely needs a decent editor not only to advise the author on American grammar but also to tighten up the writing. SMH...
— Aug 13, 2018 10:22AM
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Bárbara
is 27% done
Pizza and The Beatles.... These two are having something super close to my perfect date. Argh.
— Jul 15, 2018 11:25AM
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