Pati’s Reviews > Daisy, Yellow > Status Update

Wow! At the end she thanks her " proofing team".... 4 people supposedly proofread this. I hate to tell her but she needs a new team, people who will be honest not only about all the un-American things but also about all of the errors that are still in the book! SMH... I won't read this author again.

Wow! Dialogue just got weirder. One guy speaking and the other thinking... yet the talking guy responds to the thoughts. SMH.... absolutely ridiculous

No freaking American would say, "we'd better get mobile"!!!! We'd say that we'd better get going or we better get a move on. SMH.... Damn! If you don't know how to make American characters sound American then don't write stories based in America!! Or hire a freaking editor or proofreader that is American and can correct all your mistakes!

Living room set! Not "lounge suite" UGH!!!!!!

Stopping by is how an American would say it. Not "calling in"...

and now we're back to being told what they've talked about.... *sigh* I really need to remember not to buy this authors books anymore.

WTF is wood turning and metal turning?!

*sigh* I can't believe this is supposed to be set in the US. This definitely needs a decent editor not only to advise the author on American grammar but also to tighten up the writing. SMH...