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This needs a decent editor and proofreading.

Okay.... Nope!! I don't want to read about a mc in a mm romance getting blown by a woman. DNF!

WTF?! Sounds like Epstein island. Hell no!!

*sigh* I'm now doing a lot of skimming.... page after of nothing needed being missed..... *sigh*

*sigh* Zzzzzz..... Things don't need to be repeated a million times. SMH.... I'm bored out of my mind.

OMDG!!! He's his ancestor NOT "descendant"!!

Put his left hand on the back of the saddle? Really?!

*sigh* I'm so sick of reading "I've not"..... it pulls me out of the story every damn time and I have to reread it changing it to "I haven't". I'm almost 60 and have never heard an American say "I've not". SMH....

*sigh* I am so sick of hearing about his ex-wife and drinking! SMH.....

I must note, that despite my problems with this book it is actually sticking in my mind. I remember what's going on in it this morning.

Already double checked a statement was accurate or not...... it wasn't. Doesn't bode well....

Wow! This starts on page 11. SMH.....

Ugh!!! I really, really, REALLY need to check whether I like an author before I buy a new book!!!! Damn it! I should have checked first!!!!

*sigh*..... So many things bothering me already and now a 2 week time jump?! Really???? SMH.... I should have saved my money.

Huh? "My rambling thoughts" ..... Seriously?! .... Oh, this doesn't bode well.

DNF

*sigh* Not starting out good for me. Info dump on top of more info dump..... SMH..... just 3 pages in... only 2% and I'm already on here making this post. *sigh*

He can't write... he can't play guitar... needs pt... yet he "made gingerbread"?! Seriously?! SMH

*sigh* I keep thinking that I have read this before. The farther I get the more I believe that. *sigh* I'm not seeing even a hint that it's been previously published but I swear that I have read it! *sigh*

This reads more as a draft than a published book. The story and characters are okay but the timing is jacked. SMH....

DNF....

WTF?! He saw them in '83?...... and he was in his 20s then?! That would make him in his 60s now.... mid to late 60s. SMH..... it'd be nice to know their ages.

The power is out.... we were just told that... also told they decided not to run the generator.... yet somehow the tree lights are on?! Duh! I'm sorry but this isn't the first mess up that should have been caught before publishing. SMH....

Damn! This POV change was really jarring and totally unexpected.

*sigh* Zzzzz....

Oops! He got onion rings not fries.

All telling..... boring.

Zzzzzz.....

*sigh**sigh**sigh**sigh* I get it! I understand! I don't need to keep reading about this through conversations with their F-ing dogs!!! SMH....

*sigh*...... I am so sick of reading "I've not"!!!!! It's driving me crazy!.... pulls me right out of the story every damn time!!!!!!