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This book had such great moments, the pride could be so beautiful, but then there were not so great moments. It all felt disjointed and some of it didn’t seem to lead anywhere at all. Then there was stuff that could’ve been trimmed down a lot. I don’t know how to score this one. Might actually have to read other reviews to decide.

Over the jumping around.

Part 2 is tedious. This book feels very disjointed.

A bit preachy at times and it jumps from topic to topic and sometimes you don’t know if the ‘story’ is finished or where it fits in to the main tale.