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Lady Galaxy
is 33% done
I'm about a third of the way through, and I'm having trouble keeping the characters straight. Once again, too many viewpoints, two timelines. Is that now a requirement for general fiction books? I hope it's a trend that soon turns back to one viewpoint. Clearly noted flashbacks not in italics would be OK. Did this start with "The Winter Sea"?
— May 15, 2026 11:07AM
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