Status Updates From The Wereling

"The case of the raving wereling."

She said the thing!

These are not logical assumptions. He's figuring this out just because the plot outline wants him to.

But like...he doesn't even have to realize that Harvey wants solitude and considers the Dunes his "territory." The idea that a serial killer wants to serial kill in a fairly isolated location is more reasonable and would yield the same results.

Typo: "...there's no such thing as a werewolf. not a real one, anyhow." Either that first period should be a comma or "not" should be capitalized. Preferably the latter.

Typo: "rivited" should be "riveted."

Once again: men are brunets, not brunettes.

Typo: Sherman becomes "Serman" at one point.

"Olfactory organ." He's so pretentious.
Shut up, it's your fucking nose.

The scene from the first-page preview, but without the typo. Interesting.

"You ordered one deluxe with the works, a large fry, and a large chocolate shake. That'll be three twenty-four."
"At the rate things are going up, pretty soon we won't be able to afford to eat."

The Year of Our Common Era 2026: 😑

Do you have a job, Gretchen? 'Cause if not, STFU about not thinking Harvey's is good enough.

Typo: "kicked of the force" should be "kicked off the force."

I'm gonna assume "doubledamn" was intentional, though Robbins might have just missed his space bar.

It loses its impact if you call it "the...thing..." every time that you mention it.

Also, the point of ellipses is to give a sense of pause, which really doesn't work when you're trying to convey a sudden attack.

Another missing quotation mark.

Typo: "Tomorrow he would work his normal, shift at the deli" doesn't need that random comma.

There are a lot of typos in this book.

"He could get in, but he could do it without her noticing?" Pretty sure that's supposed to be "could he do it."

Typo: Missing quotation mark.

"Once the word spread that the Dunes were haunted by a werewolf he'd have them to himself every night."

That or you'll create an urban legend that will attract a ton MORE people. I know I'd be a lot more likely to hang out on the beach all night if there was a chance of seeing a werewolf.

"The woman was a diminutive blonde, the guy a brunette."

NO. Men are brunets, not brunettes.

If I had a nickel for every book that I've read today about people traveling through the Hungarian countryside, I would have two nickels. Which isn't a lot, but it's weird that it happened twice.

Typo: "than" should be "then."

Not a great look, having that one page one.

One mail order werewolf costumer coming right up.

I want everyone to know that the cover of the copy I'm reading is way cooler