Status Updates From Trials of the Serpent: Book...

I forgot why this book was taking me so long to read. And then I picked it up and damn- wall of text after wall of text. The dialogue is lengthy and every page has something happening on it. It’s so heavy with lore and world building still. Yet I really want it to be over. Respectfully, I think there’s enough material in this book for multiple books if you were to pace them out better.

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“My opponent was walking slowly, his heartbeat rapid. Fear and hesitation overcame him, leaving focus and drive to dwindle”

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