Status Updates From Waiting for Rain

WTH? They've been done with the bar for a while! They had their last day quite a bit back! They've been working in Leicester already!! Yet now, suddenly, they're "completing the finishing touches and in a few days they'll be off to Leicester."?!?! Oops!

All these 'straining cocks' and boners and stuff hold in front of groins - dear author it's getting tiring. How about mixing up your vocabulary or just moving on with the storyline???

...his final suck unleashed the liquid fire that burned in my balls and I came in his mouth...

Liquid fire, huh? That's...not hot.

...his hungry tongue probing my mouth like an octopus tentacle.
What's with all the weird, and gross at times, purple prose here, Mac Nicol?

Almost two hours left?! For fuck's sake. *face palms* I feel like this is never going to fucking end. Grrr.

...and made my groin burn like a menthol heat pack had been shoved down my pants...
That's a good thing? *looks around* I don't think that's a good thing.

Sure, get mad at the ex. Because it's all his fault. Oh, wait! No it's not...it's all your fault. You stupid fuckwit asshole douche bag.

In all the communication with the ex Rain managed to never mentioned he had a boyfriend? Then kisses the ex??? Then gets caught kissing the ex by Toby and is all, "Oh, no, I didn't mean it! I just wanted to make sure I was over him and I didn't feel the same for him as I do for you!"
Fucking wanker.

Rain, agreeing to meet your ex is not the only shitty part. Neglecting to tell your current boyfriend about it, and even going so far as to LIE, is what makes you a right fucking bastard.
Karma is a bitch, asshole. Hopefully you'll get yours.
Though I'm beginning to doubt it. Bastard.

...his semen filled my mouth like thick strands of spider silk.
Okay, just...ew. Ewwwww

Rain is lying. He's a lying liar who lies.

Yeah, like you didn't see that coming.

God, how I hate stupid people.

Oh, hell no. Toby is going to go confront the homophobic asshole who's been harassing him without telling Rain or anyone? Stupid, stupid idiot.

Putting a pin in this for tonight. Will pick it back up tomorrow.
Gotta say though: I am not digging the narration.

So...Rain's a real dickhead, huh? What an emotionally constipated fucker.

The voice Matthew Lloyd Davies uses for Toby makes him sound like a poncy twat.

It's rare that I actually cheer in the first chapter. Now I'm even more excited for this!

Audio choice for today.

Tammy...are you stupid??

This is so good!!! And hot. Quite hot.

That was very, very hot. I should NOT have read that while sitting at the hair salon.

Nice.to meet you. Mind if I stick my tongue down your throat? These two aren't wasting any time.