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...his final suck unleashed the liquid fire that burned in my balls and I came in his mouth...

Liquid fire, huh? That's...not hot.

...his hungry tongue probing my mouth like an octopus tentacle.
What's with all the weird, and gross at times, purple prose here, Mac Nicol?

...and made my groin burn like a menthol heat pack had been shoved down my pants...
That's a good thing? *looks around* I don't think that's a good thing.

Sure, get mad at the ex. Because it's all his fault. Oh, wait! No it's not...it's all your fault. You stupid fuckwit asshole douche bag.

In all the communication with the ex Rain managed to never mentioned he had a boyfriend? Then kisses the ex??? Then gets caught kissing the ex by Toby and is all, "Oh, no, I didn't mean it! I just wanted to make sure I was over him and I didn't feel the same for him as I do for you!"
Fucking wanker.

Rain, agreeing to meet your ex is not the only shitty part. Neglecting to tell your current boyfriend about it, and even going so far as to LIE, is what makes you a right fucking bastard.
Karma is a bitch, asshole. Hopefully you'll get yours.
Though I'm beginning to doubt it. Bastard.

...his semen filled my mouth like thick strands of spider silk.
Okay, just...ew. Ewwwww

Rain is lying. He's a lying liar who lies.

Yeah, like you didn't see that coming.

God, how I hate stupid people.