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lit after they saved Tim, it got boring, stopped reading eh. will try to finish

Okay, so i'm not sure if i should be happy about how things are going or be annoyed with it. Especially with Tim (Timmy FELL down the well - Haha) AND ERIC, Delsin, well called it.

.....like will I get a shock of my life with him like I got with Delsin. The only thing I dislike (so far) about this book is that it reminds me of a first draft, there are missing words, grammar errors and repetitive ones. But I am trying to ignore the mistakes and enjoy the storyline ^^

Okay so, I really like how suspenseful it is. It had me guessing all through... like if Delsin was gay and is trying real hard keeping it a secret. But with all the search on his computer and his OVERPROTECTIVENESS of Tim, like hell yeah! And to be honest, I never hated a character so much as I hated Eric, like seriously, his part makes no sense! What is with him, he reminds me of a 5 yo child.... and Tim.....TBC

Prose is too life-like. In most fiction some of the repetitive and/or boring bits are cut out of the narrative. This tale could have been a bit like that

Not everyone reacts to things the same way so my inabaility to understand why the characters react the way I'd expect them to is OK... just wish that the prose was more well crafted. The characters are sympathetic if nothing else.

Interesting story. A bit repetitive in spots but actually very like what teens in that situation would be like. It is a bit weird that 2 of the 3 POV's are presented in 3rd person while one is in 1st person

I have this weird feeling that I've read this story before. yet it just came out.

Really good read so far