Status Updates From Waking Forever (Waking Fore...

So much telling and no showing at all. I'm told her boyfriend is annoying and needy but for a 3-year-old relationship, his needs are rather mild. But he kisses badly so he's dumped. Enter the vampire beauty with green eyes. I'm told she's "remarkable, brave, intelligent, etc" yet it is never shown, never revealed in dialogue. Someone mentioned this being Twilight for lesbians. I'd say it's even worse than that.

I was really loving this book and then things just happened very quick and it put me off, may carry on reading.