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For river songs by Steve, so far it has multiple sentences with what normally characterize as run on, with tons of phrases back into a sentence. But it works so well. Similar to the pacing of Night Bitch, the wording packs a punch in driving the pace of the story.

I used to write in run-on sentences when I was in primary school in Singapore for my Chinese composition. My Chinese teacher will criticize me for a writing run on sentences. Sentence is full of commas with phrases. That memory have always stayed with me because I still honestly feel like I’ve not done something wrong.