Status Updates From Mine (The Godfathers #1)

How annoying she was literally just kidnapped rescued and now she’s pouting that she don’t want to stay and wants to go back to her life

Random thought, but does anyone actually like the scenes where one of the MC is fantasizing about the other and masterbates? For me, I can't think of a bigger waste of page space. I don't need to read someone else's fantasy inside my fantasy. Just move the story along dammit!

MMC is supposedly so powerful and scary yet acts like a little kid. Makes big plans and says/do things without thinking. #turnoff 🤮

Where’s the storyline? Need more substance and character depth.

“I can handle a lot.”

Girl, be honest, you can’t. MMC literally funded your whole life and you acted like a brat after he bailed you out of jail. Now acting all tough. Ugh.