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Still nothing has happened. This book is a waste of time of my time. I’m starting to get distracted like “maybe I have some cleaning to do?” When it gets to the point where I’d rather be cleaning than reading you know there is a problem.

Also, no spice at all. Not even an inking of spice or romance. These people could be random classmates for how platonic everything is.

These people aren’t even attempting to find the artifact that’s controlling the teachers. They’re just sitting around talking and complaining and practice fighting. They’re all depressed that they can’t leave until they break the enchantment, but they’re doing nothing! They aren’t taking any steps to break the control at all. This is so aggravating!!

43% into the book and absolutely nothing has happened. No plot/storyline progression. No relationship development. No character development. Nothing at all. It feels pointless. I doubt this is going to be the last book in the series because this feels like a “filler” book.