Status Updates From Steve's Barmaid (Abandoned ...

I stand by the fact that it lacked depth and had too much sex. Which is sad because Billie and Steve were alright characters. Maybe I’m just not the target audience.

I just saw that this book only has 260 pages. It felt waaaay longer. I’m not sure if I want to up my rating to be honest because I feel like I have read quite a few books oft the same length that were better.

I still liked a few things. Billie and Steve were very cute together and they have great friends. I also liked that Billie got to live the dream of owning a bar even if it’s on another planet.

If this was a novella with under 250 pages the rating would be higher but at that length the story has to be better.

I’m not sure if that’s because I didn’t read the previous books but the world building wasn’t really interesting. I’m also unsure as to why these women were kidnapped to the planet.

The author also decided to skip the few weeks that Billie and Steve were getting to know each other. So they weng from strangers to mates abruptly.

The writing was very simple, the characters weren’t very deep and there was almost no plot only sex scenes (that I partially skipped because it got boring).

I think I’ll have to give it two stars.

I haven’t read the previous books but I hope that won’t be a problem.

I got this for free around christmas 2024 and I think this could be the perfect read after a thriller.

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