Status Updates From The Broposal

This may be a DNF and I’m shocked 😳

the saddest tango scene ive ever read.

Aagh Kenny is soo stupid, it's so obvious that Jackie is faking the baby! Also forget slow burn, there was like nothing for 55% of the novel, and now when I should be getting my first sex scene, I'm not!

Also, author had Han ask Kenny if he was a dom or sub- but I felt like there was some top/bottom confusion there. "Vers" is technically an axis of sub/dom, but I wasn't very convinced by the writing that author does

This book has felt long - why haven't they hooked up yet? Why are they both so bad at reading each other's emotions, when they are the people who know each other the best? :/

They constantly bring up money as a problem, but they're ordering Ubers and Instacart and Pizzas all the time!

Also, not loving the Jackie Pregnancy plot. Looks like that 3/5 might be well earned

It's fun, but nothing special. The writing is a bit cumbersome - too many 'bros'. Solid 3/5. But I want to read more, so probably going to put in a 4/5 instead