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Mel
is on page 170 of 178
All the buttocks in this book are specifically described as hairless. Why.
— 18 hours, 46 min ago
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Mel
is on page 79 of 178
“…wondering how she could possibly trust a man with so many piercings to show her how wonderful life can be.”
Wild guess but I think the type of people who are trawling around internet forums about dying and are willing to be buried alive for 30+ minutes are not going to be phased by some body mods my dude.
— 19 hours, 23 min ago
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Wild guess but I think the type of people who are trawling around internet forums about dying and are willing to be buried alive for 30+ minutes are not going to be phased by some body mods my dude.
Mel
is on page 74 of 178
“Dear diary, mood: apathetic. My life is spiralling downwards…”
Way too much telling and not enough showing in this so far. We get it, the protagonist thinks he’s the worst person to ever exist, but we have to get it because it’s stated every other paragraph.
The “ritual” is fascinating and has a lot of potential if it wasn’t bogged down by the 2 edgy 2 live vibe.
— 19 hours, 29 min ago
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Way too much telling and not enough showing in this so far. We get it, the protagonist thinks he’s the worst person to ever exist, but we have to get it because it’s stated every other paragraph.
The “ritual” is fascinating and has a lot of potential if it wasn’t bogged down by the 2 edgy 2 live vibe.
Logan
is 46% done
Beautifully written, but oh man, coming up for air is necessary as it is DARK down there.
— Feb 21, 2026 12:58PM
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