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Mel
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All the buttocks in this book are specifically described as hairless. Why.
— Mar 05, 2026 08:43PM
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Mel
is on page 79 of 178
“…wondering how she could possibly trust a man with so many piercings to show her how wonderful life can be.”
Wild guess but I think the type of people who are trawling around internet forums about dying and are willing to be buried alive for 30+ minutes are not going to be phased by some body mods my dude.
— Mar 05, 2026 08:05PM
Wild guess but I think the type of people who are trawling around internet forums about dying and are willing to be buried alive for 30+ minutes are not going to be phased by some body mods my dude.
Mel
is on page 74 of 178
“Dear diary, mood: apathetic. My life is spiralling downwards…”
Way too much telling and not enough showing in this so far. We get it, the protagonist thinks he’s the worst person to ever exist, but we have to get it because it’s stated every other paragraph.
The “ritual” is fascinating and has a lot of potential if it wasn’t bogged down by the 2 edgy 2 live vibe.
— Mar 05, 2026 07:59PM
Way too much telling and not enough showing in this so far. We get it, the protagonist thinks he’s the worst person to ever exist, but we have to get it because it’s stated every other paragraph.
The “ritual” is fascinating and has a lot of potential if it wasn’t bogged down by the 2 edgy 2 live vibe.
