Status Updates From Ticket to Ride™ : An Unexpe...

The narrative voice is trying to be funny while talking directly to the reader, and this is not something I generally find funny or endearing. "Well I was going to write this but I didn't! And that's funny!" I mean, not really.

Also I don't know if anyone believes a contest would let a child on the train without an adult. Clearly the prize should include a chaperone on the trip.

Mia’s 2nd Year of Books: Days 35-37

Okay, the story is picking up speed (pun intended), but are there going to be other kids on this adventure or are we just going to be with Teddy? I’m getting to like him, but sometimes I also want to hear from another kid!

Still a lot of exposition, but there’s more action now, which makes me happy.

Well, the start is a bit rough. I love the game Ticket to Ride though, so I’m powering through. Thinking there’s a little bit too much exposition before we get into the action. Hopefully, it gets better from here.