Briana’s Reviews > Ticket to Ride™ : An Unexpected Journey > Status Update

The narrative voice is trying to be funny while talking directly to the reader, and this is not something I generally find funny or endearing. "Well I was going to write this but I didn't! And that's funny!" I mean, not really.

Also I don't know if anyone believes a contest would let a child on the train without an adult. Clearly the prize should include a chaperone on the trip.