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"Women's rugby isn't like other sports" proceeds to describe all other national teams, doesn't seem to understand the difference between club and national teams.
"A new dark romcom" - WORDS MEAN THINGS.

I'm only on page 3 and I don't know how much more of this writing I can take. It's so repetitive! You've said one baby is 4 months old and that there's a twin, you don't then have to say the other baby is 4 months old. You've said Raphael is the soon to be brother in law, you don't have to refer to him as the soon to be brother in law again in the next paragraph, you can just say Raphael.