Status Updates From Este mundo ciego

No idea what the last like three pages had to do with anything but maybe the annoying spirit can’t be trusted?

This is getting a little too poetic in a way. I am sometimes a little lost with the repetition of the spirits name and it feels too slow sometimes. It’s a good portrait of feeling purposeless and then regaining hope through something small. Some events also contradict but not in an obvious way just in a way of I recognize that those two things can’t be true but maybe they are in this history?