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Becky Jo is on page 164 of 305
No idea what the last like three pages had to do with anything but maybe the annoying spirit can’t be trusted?
— 12 hours, 5 min ago
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Becky Jo is 45% done
This is getting a little too poetic in a way. I am sometimes a little lost with the repetition of the spirits name and it feels too slow sometimes. It’s a good portrait of feeling purposeless and then regaining hope through something small. Some events also contradict but not in an obvious way just in a way of I recognize that those two things can’t be true but maybe they are in this history?
— 16 hours, 26 min ago
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