Status Updates From Crossed Sticks (Buffalo War...

This was a DNF for me …, fucking hell the writing is terrible.

When they fuck its hella cringe and their «bonding» doesnt relly make sense. In my notes i have some examples of how the writing is bad.

Sorry not sorry

I moved with him, and the slip and slide of our dicks became the center of my world. It was impossible to focus on anything but his rough tongue, powerful arms, and huge cock.

🤧🫩😬 what am I reading

“Here’s the deal, then. Your ass belongs to me. My cock is big, and you’re gonna feel it. I’ll finish getting you ready, and while I do, you are not to utter a sound unless it’s the safe word. Got it?”

Someone help me. Is this sexy?

“Stick your dirty cock up my ass. I’m so tight you’ll have to hold me still while you work it in, so make sure I grunt and squirm. Then, hold me down and plow me like you’ve been craving it as long as I have. Like you hurt inside needing to fuck somebody and you’re never allowed to. Fuck me harder than you’ve ever fucked anyone.” Mm idk about this dialogue lol 😂

“Good call. My dick’s having a tantrum. He can’t wait to be inside your awesome hockey butt.” Relieved to know I’d be getting it soon, I sighed. “Careful. My glutes may be bruised, but they’re as tough as steel.”

That..that isn’t as sexy as the author thought it was. 🤧

Loud splatter of cum. What is this hentai? I don’t think they produced enough cum (they said seamen and I wanted to cry) to have it make a splatter noise 🫟 bro wtf am I reading

This book would most likely be better with its over narration if it was in 3rd person instead of 1st.

Oh god, idk about this already the pro looks already cringe