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The first 120 could’ve been condensed into a prologue. The storyline regarding Clark should’ve been played out and gone into more detail. It felt like fluff and was unnecessary. The ending was rushed. The amnesia was rushed. This could’ve played out a lot better than what it did. It was a great storyline, but the delivery was subpar.

Clark is stalking her and sending her flowers and notes but yet it’s never mentioned really in the book. It’s weird plot.

All of part one could’ve been a prologue.

How is the fact that she doesn’t wear dresses anymore? Have anything to do with the current outfit she’s wearing or the book. Is this more fluff? It’s like talking to a talkative six-year-old that can’t stay on topic.

Book is very wordy.

The author just repeats herself and rambles on and on about the same issue. We get it. She wants to leave him and is pushing him away.

The author goes on about random things that don’t even matter in the book. It feels like word, vomit, and overdoing it with describing the character. Get on with it.

The author is rambling on about the characteristics of the people in the book for pages and pages. It’s too much you don’t need to go into that much description.