Status Updates From Unsurpassed (No Rival, #1)

But that is a hell of a good cover…..

I don’t understand the relationship between Max, Ryan, and the main character. I also don’t understand if this was meant to be a reverse harem, or if the author just wanted to throw in a quick tease to a dysfunctional throuple.
But the sex scenes are also very…..off. They don’t have a smooth flow. Seems very…I can’t describe it. Broken? Jagged? Abrupt?

"He knew Aubree was still struggling against the truth, but sooner or later, she would to have to accept her fate. She belonged to him."
Internal dialog of the dude she met less than a week ago... I mean, come on! I get that this is a novella (only 8 chapters), but ffs. Awkward insta love bullshit

As he slid his fingers down the silky skin of Max’s erection, he groaned and Ryan stroked his shaft swearing the pleasure was his own. Tearing his mouth away, Max gulped for air. “Damn you. I have four more weeks of this torture.”

Even as Ryan felt the evil grin stretch across his face, he couldn’t stop it from forming, and he set a steady pace.

I would be honored if you would spend some time with me this evening. I can’t promise to behave, but as I said, I am worth it. Not to mention, I’m so good when I’m being bad.”

Review to follow

MEN!! Read it to find out what I mean.

Very steamy read!