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BriBri is 65% done
But that is a hell of a good cover…..
Dec 29, 2022 10:22PM
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BriBri is 65% done
I don’t understand the relationship between Max, Ryan, and the main character. I also don’t understand if this was meant to be a reverse harem, or if the author just wanted to throw in a quick tease to a dysfunctional throuple.
But the sex scenes are also very…..off. They don’t have a smooth flow. Seems very…I can’t describe it. Broken? Jagged? Abrupt?
Dec 29, 2022 10:19PM
Unsurpassed (No Rival #1)


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