Status Updates From Antipathy: Book 1 (Fullcolo...

This is good—super brutal—but fight scenes are one of my major weak points as a reader, and there have been a *lot* of fight scenes already. I always have a hard time following fights unless they're broken up with dialogue. After a few sentences it starts to blur until all I see on the page is "fight fight they're fighting punch kick fight." So yeah, this is interesting and horrifying, but I hope more happens soon.