Status Updates From Tesser: A Dragon Among Us (...

Argh! I'm wanting this book to work out, because I like the almost science fiction approach he's made to the idea of magic returning to the world, and the interpersonal drama is nice and snarky, if a little too...idk.
but I'm already starting to see a bunch of errors when he gets to the action scenes, which throws me.
Do Not Throw combat scenes at the Veterans if you can't get them right!

so far this seems like a cross between Sleeping Giants and Rise and Fall of D.O.D.O. Interesting and funny but maybe not good or great.