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Realizing that sometimes these narrators sound like they could be narrating a airplane flight safety demonstration instead of an intimate scene...

mi corazón de pollooooo.. Caiden :c

He died.



Mae, no estoy sintiendo nada por Cooper. todo mal.

siento que tantos capítulos de ver a Jaime enamorarse y estar tan seguro de Cooper va a quitarle peso o no me va a convencer lo suficiente cuando se enamore de Caiden. Y es medio saber que va a pasar de un gemelo al otro cuando Cooper se vaya al más allá.

es demasiado temprano para estar llorando mae

This is an enjoyable and unique enough story, but the narration is really flat, definitely falling more into the "narration" than "acting" column.

This may be something that comes up later, but I wish this book had more of an acknowledgement of different degrees of SI - right now there's too much of an implication that one either one wants to sewer slide, or one wants to live, and it's MUCH more complicated than that.

Chapter 15. That is all. 😢

😭😭