mondschatten’s Reviews > That One Moment: Altered Paths, Book 1 > Status Update
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This may be something that comes up later, but I wish this book had more of an acknowledgement of different degrees of SI - right now there's too much of an implication that one either one wants to sewer slide, or one wants to live, and it's MUCH more complicated than that.
— Oct 26, 2026 09:40PM
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mondschatten
is on page 64
Realizing that sometimes these narrators sound like they could be narrating a airplane flight safety demonstration instead of an intimate scene...
— Oct 28, 2026 05:44AM
mondschatten
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This is an enjoyable and unique enough story, but the narration is really flat, definitely falling more into the "narration" than "acting" column.
— Oct 26, 2026 10:07PM