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Christina, but with tea
Christina, but with tea is 12% done
I would throw this book if I weren't reading it on my iPad! Now the Hero is said to be wearing jeans. This thing can't decide if it's set in 1800's America or during the French Revolution.
Jun 18, 2014 06:52PM Add a comment
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Christina, but with tea
Christina, but with tea is 9% done
If you're freaking historical "gentry" why do you use words like "cool sexy smile" and "I better"? Bad writing, oh, how I hate it.
Jun 18, 2014 06:26PM Add a comment
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Christina, but with tea
Christina, but with tea is 8% done
Now she's using the word "sexy" to describe a guy. What time is this supposed to be set in? What place? It's obviously supposed to be historical but the writing and word choices are so confusing! It reads like a cross between a western (cowboy, okay, stagecoach) and something else (nobles, rebels, estate). This is making me grumpy. :(
Jun 18, 2014 06:23PM Add a comment
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Christina, but with tea
Christina, but with tea is 8% done
Further confused re: setting due to use of "okay" by a character.
Jun 18, 2014 06:18PM Add a comment
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Christina, but with tea
Christina, but with tea is 6% done
Reading this on Scribd. I'm confused about the setting. Is it England, Europe, or the American west?
Jun 18, 2014 06:13PM Add a comment
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