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Sissi
Sissi is 30% done
¡Vivan los hombres enamorados!
Mar 06, 2026 04:30AM Add a comment
Vile Heart: A Dark MM Sci-Fi College Romance

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⦻ eyeless jack ⦻ is on page 38 of 88
Ok this is pissing me off. You can’t even remember your own character’s names??? Misspelling Ilya/Illya/Illyas and Galaya/Galya multiple times each way and somehow you and your editor (if you had one) both not catching it???
Jan 30, 2026 12:45PM 2 comments
Vile Heart: A Dark MM Sci-Fi College Romance

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⦻ eyeless jack ⦻ is on page 37 of 88
A light year is a measure of distance, not of time… maybe google it to check if you’re using a phrase correctly before publishing it in a book
Jan 30, 2026 12:38PM Add a comment
Vile Heart: A Dark MM Sci-Fi College Romance

⦻ eyeless jack ⦻
⦻ eyeless jack ⦻ is on page 32 of 88
The inconsistencies just don’t stop
Jan 30, 2026 12:15PM Add a comment
Vile Heart: A Dark MM Sci-Fi College Romance

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⦻ eyeless jack ⦻ is on page 28 of 88
The main guy fucking sucks bro I don’t wanna read 60 more pages of him being a whiny asshole
Jan 30, 2026 12:07PM Add a comment
Vile Heart: A Dark MM Sci-Fi College Romance

⦻ eyeless jack ⦻
⦻ eyeless jack ⦻ is on page 28 of 88
“Being privileged was awesome, but it didn’t always make things easier.”


What yes it does that’s literally what privilege is
Also nothing about this feels consensual in any way, he says this line bc he’s aroused that the man he loves keeps telling him no
Jan 30, 2026 12:04PM Add a comment
Vile Heart: A Dark MM Sci-Fi College Romance

⦻ eyeless jack ⦻
⦻ eyeless jack ⦻ is on page 15 of 88
Dear author:
So is it Ilya, Illya, or Illyas?

Fire your editor immediately, if you even had one, because this is a mess.
Jan 30, 2026 11:23AM Add a comment
Vile Heart: A Dark MM Sci-Fi College Romance

⦻ eyeless jack ⦻
⦻ eyeless jack ⦻ is on page 13 of 88
“Camren straightened his black heart pin and watched how it shone brightly. Red. the colour of blood. The colour of love.”


Wait is the pin black or red?
Jan 30, 2026 11:17AM Add a comment
Vile Heart: A Dark MM Sci-Fi College Romance

⦻ eyeless jack ⦻
⦻ eyeless jack ⦻ is on page 11 of 88
She keeps spelling one of the character’s names differently every time
Jan 30, 2026 11:09AM 3 comments
Vile Heart: A Dark MM Sci-Fi College Romance

⦻ eyeless jack ⦻
⦻ eyeless jack ⦻ is on page 10 of 88
This feels like a hastily-written first draft
Jan 30, 2026 11:03AM Add a comment
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Karina
Karina is on page 48 of 88
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Karina
Karina is on page 35 of 88
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Karina
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Karina
Karina is on page 15 of 88
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