Status Updates From Weekend with the Tycoon (In...

Nice

“How do you take your coffee?” She asked as he reemerged.
With you.
“Black.”
All he could think about was grabbing her and throwing her on the bed, kissing her everywhere

“Boyfriend jeans,” he repeated as if he’d never heard the phrase. “I should give you more of my jeans. They look much better on you.”

He froze.

Blake’s father Richard said, as he walked into the room and wrapped Samantha up in a big hug. “Nice to meet you young lady. You are sure a beauty. Come here Blake. Give your old man a hug!”

This man is such a dear.

I'm not really into the third person tbh...

Wtfffff. The intro is sooooo mechanical...
It feels like me trying to force-write an essay with loads of description of the surroundings but not about myself...

rich, alpha male, check and check;

Meh. Struggling to get into this. Blake runs so hot and cold. And I hate when grown adults have issues with sharing a room

Blake is pretty judgemental and self-righteous about his family's business. Samantha spends too much time in her head, and unfortunately, we get to hear every boring thought.

Makeovers are great but I notice no one ever writes about Cinderella having blisters from he new Loubouton shoes. I guess designer shoes don't need to be broken in?