Status Updates From A Break in the Clouds Vol. 1

the book was expensive, i'm gonna finnish it òó
Also sometimes the chars are just so random, like "Oh i want this scene and scene to happen, it doesnt fit the characteristics of the MC, but whatever, i just change it for that scene." It's jarring.

CAN YAN XIE STOP WITH THE FEMINIZATION OF TIANG EY 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄 for fucks sake, yes tiang is out of a fucking 3 year long coma for less than a month. Ofc he's fucking weak. But this delicate flower bs is getting on my nerves bcs it's not meant in a cute way ugh.

Why is the story so interestiing meh. I really don't see any chemistry in both MCs - the pretending to be gay scene was fun, but eh ... it always ends with Yan spouting some stupid asshole line *eye roll*

"have you ever peeled an onion?"
"no. I'm a man. And men don't belong in the kitchen."

😑😑😑😑😑 Ah yes. Yan Xie is getting more and more likeable. Not.

For tiang wanting to lay low, switching into full police mode as soon as he's on a crime scene is pretty stupid 🙄

Why is the story interesting, but why are the mcs not x,D meeeeh

Someones really very confinced of himself, and im eyerolling - sure everything Mr. Xie says is correct ... yeah, sure.

Well, the first introduction of Yan Xie, one of the MCs, is quite ... shit. He's an asshole, and not one of those "oh hot asshole" but just an asshole. Threatening a bartender with a knife bcs he's too stupid to read the menu and that his drink is non-alcoholic ??? as a police officer? Excuse me, Mr. Edgelord.

I'm sadly very unconvinced ...

Would I be wrong to call out of work to finish this?

So far this is way more focused on the case than romance, which for me isn’t a negative thing, but I know for some danmei readers it could be.